#32? Maybe...
2009-08-01 04:25 pmLet's see...I was tumbling the poem in process this morning when I was half asleep...can I remember what I was thinking?
What I had last:
I am the bard of the broken
walking a path of shards.
I give voice to words unspoken
and something something guard(s).
This is what I think I had this morning
He is the bard of the broken
walking on shards of glass;
He gives voice to words unspoken,
releasing the ghosts of the past.
I'm not sure if I like that or not, but it worked for me when I was half asleep.
What I had last:
I am the bard of the broken
walking a path of shards.
I give voice to words unspoken
and something something guard(s).
This is what I think I had this morning
He is the bard of the broken
walking on shards of glass;
He gives voice to words unspoken,
releasing the ghosts of the past.
I'm not sure if I like that or not, but it worked for me when I was half asleep.